boyparts
at beginning... boring for something that covers so many Saucy?? topics...
contemporary fiction thoughts...
boring... lack of voice..
tells not shows...
tells not shows...
see what was trying to b done but didn't do it as well as couldve
the twists are twisting... im just thinking ok . not whipped by it.
think a lot more little things could've been sewn into the unreliable narration. ..
v art school.. not in a good way .. those flop ppl that think they're doing smthn lol
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